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All Comments on 'Just The Beginning'

by Matty_Walter

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Sorry guys--You who were hoping for another RAPE

to help you firm up your wittle dickey--SURPRISE

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
The Surprise is on you

Don't be surprized if you receive all 0's. Too bad that's the lowest score to give.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
1st story is always tough, but they do get better!

The stoy has some good foundation, but needs more detail and longer description to turly make a great story to read.

Slower and detailed over time, chapter 1, 2, 3...etc.... is a much better way to go.

I look forward to more from you.

Thanks

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