All Comments on 'Just This Once'

Bet on it.

Great intimate story. I really did like it.

Wouldn't it be good if Mel was accepting, or if he worked to his death.

Then they could be together.

luggage not lugage. Otherwise, good story.

from what did read thus far --- --- excellent ++ fantastic &&

sensational ............. MY EXTREMELY QUICK VERSION

THE PART2PART --- Marcus\Carrie continue their tryst Mel almost

catches them least1least literally which makes them bolder . thee end

the story Gloria does catch them [" seems like she's around

their age even though she married Mel\Marcus father "] . what's she

gonna do after she catches them < now2becontinuedpart3now >

Spelling schmelling. It was a fine story.

more please more its was amazing

There HAS GOT to be a "Just Once more"....they must have at least one more!

CONGRATULATIONS! My only criticism is the absence of foreplay. If the lovers are that much into each other, there must have been a first time that was slower in getting to the main event. Nonetheless, this was an enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.

Loved every line

But the sex between them started much too fast. No teasing. No slow uncovering of her body. No dialog about how good she looked to him, what her breasts/ass/pussy looked like, and what he wanted to do to/with them. No dialog about what she wanted him to do.

Gave it four stars. Had much more potential.

Fantastic story, so well told -- great writing. And please, how about a sequel.

Should wrote another part