by neonlyte
Are you a gal from UK? If so, read on.
I loved the story. You must be very horny to write a story like this. So, let's meet and have sex (first thing, first) No raping and murdering and stuff (unless specifically requested earlier). We'll do some foreplay, then missionary, followed by goggie(to avoid 'premature'), then maybe anal for a laugh, and finally facial money shot (I'll still respect you afterwards).
We can chat a bit afterwards, if you like, and we go shopping (your money).
We really must talk!
OK, this was an incredible story. I loved it.
Thanks for sharing!!
I enjoyed getting into the mind of the rapist... and the justice in the form of his death. I'm struggling with the connection between the two sections of the story, though - the rapist and the miraculous falls. Maybe I just missed something...
This is a superb work crammed with powerful, evocative images of the English countryside, strong an unsettling voice of an evil man, and supernatural revenge. Highly worth reading and altogether gripping.