Justine Ch. 06

Great character manipulation and storyline as the noose apparently tightens around our heroines. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

To eugene???whatever

If the story is so bad why bother reading past the first paragraph? Funny, I was taught if a person had nothing nice or constructive to say then "shut up." You probable won't read this since it is so long ago but personally you are just rude.

To the author awesome story, yes some mistakes but who cares. I like the surprises, twists, and turns. I have read this entire story several times and still come back to it. Thank you and please keep writing

I can't stand it anymore... The only thing that kept me reading this story was not knowing what Justine was. Now, that that need is sated... The grammar is probably the last thing I paid attention to, because the story has so many holes it's not even funny. The protagonist is ridiculously overpowered, probably because you didn't bother to define for yourself what abilities she should have or constrain yourself to the minimum needed for her to survive. Everyone seems to know whatever they need to know, unless someone else doesn't want them to know. Natural talents and abilities play absolutely no role and apparently the characters use the author's mind to gather information they need as much as more conventional means such as questioning other characters. The beginning was promising at least...

I am glad that her mate is with her. I hope that they will be able to stay together.

You had a few typos but it was not to bad...LOL

so wrong for that! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Made me lol onto the floor. It made me think of this phrase....you dun goofed.

It's about time she recognized quinn as her mate. I wonder what mikhail would do if or when he catches up with justine and quinn. I wonder how long it will take her to listen to zoe and actually go to the queen instead of continuing to put herself and quinn in danger.

First I want to say all of ur stories are amazing. Now that you have finished Vanessa and Veronica. And I'm not to sure about Patrick would have loved to read a lil bit more about him. I hate waiting 5 to 7 days to read more. Since this is the only storie left for now can we at least get 2 to 3 chapter with at least 3 pages each chapter?I know u can do it. reason being u were writing 4 stories at one time. That way you can finish off Justine and move on to ur next STORIES waiting patiently.

Lol I love this guy Instead of freaking out about how vampires exist he's thinking "Hmmm...How can I get her some HUMAN blood...hmmm" lol I love all your characters they are all awsome Quinn and Justine and Buddy are my favorites! Keep up the good work can't wait for the next chapter!!!

I knew Justine was special, but the future queen. I never saw that coming especially since her turning was an accident. And she has admitted that Quinn is her mate although they have yet to do anything about it. And Quinn is so cute to be worrying about her getting "human blood" that I think he will make her feed from him. Now if they can just stop long enough to really think things thru.....

You are writing a very strong female character that is a true joy to follow.