All Comments on 'Kali's Beginning Ch. 02'

Like a BDSM play done by junior high students....unbelievable and immature thus loosing any erotic value.

I've read a LOT of bdsm and I enjoyed this story. Always good to read about a slut-slave realizing what she is.

Good story, but not exceptional. Writing needs to improve.

Gotta love a slut who loves being used for her Master's pleasure, and hers.

Exciting story -- erotic, kinky, very hot. I'd love to be the Master who's teaching Kali what she really is.