All Comments on 'Kali's Beginning'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

I...it's great. Got me so hot. I need a master like that! Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
too wam bam

Guess I like my fantasy a little more real....

Bar pickup to rough sex to oh I like it to you're my slave and the clock hasn't struck the witching hour.

Chapter 2 gets us what? Her locked in the basement forever more, dead, or just wishing she was. Wait, no she won't wish she was 'cause she loves it and was born for it. Sigh. What's wrong with story development? Gives more time for the spank, if nothing else.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Unrealistic

As I said.

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