All Comments on 'Karin Baker'

good job. very interesting twist in the end. i never saw that coming.

yes - correctly constructed. So few knows how. Thank you

You might have been wrong. Maybe she wanted a baby and your fertilized her "eggs" and the $300 was for your sperm. Maybe 15 years or so from now your "daughter" may be seeking her Daddy?

There is probably a good reason why Karin left you without saying good-bye.

As far as the "adultery" is concerned...."adultery" is not defined very well, even by the Holy Rollers, some of which are so-called Clergy, doing the "adultery" themselves with their parishioners, whom sometimes they even knock up.

I enjoyed your story...and the ending...very much

He kept the note, how foolish. In this day and time, it is find them, befrind them and after a night of good ole sex, forget them. This goes for women as well as men. I am happy to see that at least he got paid for his efforts. Heck, he is just another male whore or male prostitute since he got paid for his services. I am glad he kept the money and I hope he used it wisely.

Great. To say all that needs to be said with brevity is a gift! In my naive way I assume that Karen's $300.00 was to enable the young man to get home.

Great. To say all that needs to be said with brevity is a gift! In my naive way I assume that Karen's $300.00 was to enable the young man to get home.

Great story. But, it is the 402, not the 401, that leads East from Port Huron into Canada. (401 leads east from Detroit....)

A fine piece of writing. Thank you.