All Comments on 'Karina the Russian Beauty Ch. 01'

by arturo

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
great story make it a series

Arturo, great great story, please continue it, think she should be his assistant or maid in his house when wife cmes up , or better yet have wife hate russan winters and stay in home country

gdavisgdavisover 18 years ago
Hot Story

I can just imagine the Russian beauty. Really liked how the story evolved. Its fantasy, but still believable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Keep it about Karina

I liked Karina. So don't worry about the receiptionist, or maid, or anyone else. Explore Karina further for at least the next few parts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Awesome

That’s truly excellent writing and I gave it a 5. Apparently you have a talent. Nevertheless your story is totally unbelievable. Russian girl wouldn’t fuck guy which she barely know. And it’s somewhat difficult to get Russian girl to give you some head. They are rather prudish.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Any follow up?

What happened to the girl you made love with?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Totally skipped Page 2

1] Page 1 seemed to be where your writing was so bad, wanted to "whine" (think you meant "wind")

2] Would rather read tales by folks who know "what their doing" (another of your Page 1 mistakes).

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