by scene-it-all
Why in the hell would you write an incomplete story? This could have really be a barn-burner but you wasted so much space telling me about the superfluous BS such as his wine and butts. geez!
Two years ago it happened to me and you just brought it back to put a smile on my face. Thanks
Looking for a sequel, or perhaps a redux from her viewpoint
So well crafted and so nasty of you, to leave us poor readers hanging there, begging for more...
OMG, you just had to end it right then didn't you! That's like leaving a guy standing around with a hard on, man! Blue balls!! LOL Nice job, get that continuation done SOON!
I love the idea that she is about to have her first time to have her sweet young pussy invaded by a hard, loving cock. With any luck mom will join and help them both to explore their sensual pontentials.
Ron
very hot, just describe how mr. martin looks so i can think of him... purrrr
I really loved, can't wait till you finish and get that 7" in her wet Pussy and go deep inside her, breaking her hymen!
Incredibly well written. And now I'm hard as a rock. :)
Surprisingly HOT and well told.
Hope to see the continuation soon.
Meantime ... MUAH MUAH MUAH MUAH
A very hot, very erotic, very realistic story. Best I've read in a long time.