All Comments on 'Kathleen's Family Saga Pt. 01'

Yet again you have created a marvellous start to a very hot story. i think you must be among the best to develop your characters so well. I can visualise Kathleen and Oh boy............

Given 5 stars and high recommendation for others to read this story.

Many thanks for writing. After all you have toiled for others to enjoy the fruit of your labour free. Least we can do is express our appreciation - and that is very easy with you stories.

Nice of you to take trouble to cater for all readers. It is REALLY sexy story. Will collect all of your stories.

It is always a pleasure to find this kind of story from a site that offers erotic literature. It has all the ingredients to suit a wide variety of tastes.

Well Done.

I cannot work out your Nationality, but I suspect the Sub Continent by the way you leave words out of sentences. There are other faults which are similar to those 'writers' who live in the Southern states of the U.S.A. ( usually referred to as Rednecks), although these are very minor.

Great Story.....Marvellous Plot/Backdrop..Where are you now....?

These must be some of the best erotic novels ever written. These are explosive and hot compared with that gets sold for five dollars on net. Your novels are volcanic hot.

Then add the distinctive backdrop and details. It is not difficult to start imagining that characters are having sex in reality.

Why stop writing?

Hats off to you... YOU ROCK MAN

I couldn't get past the first page with the horrible lack of grammar this story contains.