All Comments on 'Kathryn'

BM,

am enjoying reading your writings. The length is just great, easliy readable. kathryn is great, more about her...and maybe she has a couple of cutie friends....??

TxWldman17@aol.com

To quick and the story was known before it even got past the second sentence. Sorry, but the lack of build up in the story killed it and . . .

You did a very good job when you wrote Kathryn. This is my FAVORITE story yet, and i cant wait to show my husband! He will love this since he always says im more like a sister to him than anything else! Anyway! Kathryn is a very good story! You are VERY talented! Keep up the good work!

Short, quick, to the point. granted it could have used a bit more build up, but theres enough long stories out there, this onegot to the point quickly. Good enough for me.

what the fuck no guy would act like that as soon as he saw his father at the airport and was introduced to his new stepmom and stepsister he would have told his dad i see you think enough of me to let me know what the hells going on now if you will excuse me i have a cab to catch and find a place to stay until i can get a return flight as soon as possible good bye keep it realistic sounding

Fast...quick and good......good hot sex

Clearly you've seen Cruel Intentions. You even used the same names.

Total fucking rubbish by a total wanker

Even tho this story was kinda short,it was action packed,totally worth 5*s.I hope the next chapters are longer and have just as much action.

Way to short but damn it was hot as hell.

Great start can't wait to see what happens next. 5/5