All Comments on 'Katie - A Short Stroke Story'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice.

Been loving all your recent output.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
She gots to have it

And she got it. Good for her. Love the part about the cum drooling out of her afterward. Only tiny problem was a long stretch where He or She started every sentence. The repetition takes a little bit away from it but it was still a good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
how does the rest of the night go

love your story lookinf forward to reading more

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

great story, needs sequels

chocolatecookie3chocolatecookie3over 11 years ago
OK

Good action, but I didn't care for the dialogue during the sex. Also, the mother had better characterization than the son! Black men are people, too.

larchr1larchr1about 11 years ago
Katie

Once again you get me hot. I love your stories. How about a sequal to this and more action for Poor Cassie.

beguiled999beguiled999almost 11 years ago
Love your work

Great story. I really love your stories. They always get me wet. I'd love to see more about poor Cassie too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Top Writer

Another top story from my favourite writer, nobody else gets me half as hard. When I'm in need of a good wank I always turn to you

jsch1947jsch1947almost 2 years ago

WOW!!!!

Slam,

Bam,

And grab your ass!!!

jsch1947jsch1947almost 2 years ago

With confidence and gentle power, he commanded her submission. He seduced her decisively. Within 10 minutes he Owned her pussy.

Give this orgasm 24hours to percolate thru her brain, and she will go to him, hungry to fuck him, anytime, anyplace.

Brilliant writing!!!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago
Every white girl's wet dream, to be taken just like that!

To be taken like that, WOW! No force required, just a wonderful submission she will remember the rest of her life yet never have again.

The only thing she will later regret is that she didn't get to orally clean his marvelous big BLACK cock!

Orpheum69

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