All Comments on 'Katie Moves In'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great story.

I enjoyed reading this story, it is fantastic. After I finish this comment I will be reading the next chapter.

colin23colin23over 11 years ago
What's wrong with having sex with your cousin?

I can never understand why some people think sex with a cousin is incest. It isn't. In most jurisdictions, including the UK, it is legal for cousins to marry and it is not uncommon for them to do so. If Katie was the narrator's sister, of course, it would be a different matter.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 2 years ago

Pretty good but there's no mention of whether he had any physical/emotional attraction to her as time went on. He got excited about her giving a guy a blowjob but no jealousy? Not a good foundation to a good incest story arc. 3*

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

It was a fair start. I didn't like Katie blowing a different guy at the party. She should have chosen her cousin. She wanted him bad enough to seduce him after the party was over. So why did she choose to blow someone else during truth or dare? Logically, if you're interested in someone, you don't have sex in front of them with somebody else. That's instantly going to kill any possibility for a relationship. 3/5

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