by DG Hear
Another of your better ones.......Kept my interest all the way through. Thank you
Another fine romance from a master of the romance genre. Full marks
Though I believe it could have ended after the explanation of Matt's black eye .
Your heroine was supposed to have made a lot of mistakes but for me she was only guilty of not learning how to use the pill.
I was so glad to read the unwritten "and they lived happily ever after" at the end of this story. Thanks for another good read. 5 stars from me!
It is not what happens to you, it is what you decide to do with it. The story was good, it is really about the choices that we can really make in life. Thank you
Lovely story with another happy ending.
The epilogue was just what I wanted to have at the end -
The final sentiment is right on and we all need to work to make life work period and work hard to make it what we want -
Simply beautiful story . even I wanted to kick the dudes in kahoonies. Love your work DG.HEAR. ...Love you all! Bye. Greg. ★★★★★★★★★★= 100 %. Game. Set and match Bye.
I do love a good story. Happy endings are generally only in story books. But I choose to believe this one. Many people I know could actually fit in different parts of the story. Combined, it can be a real story. Thank you.
Very enjoyable. Lite reading with a happy end. Couldn't ask for more.
They let the prick off easy... I remember a 2000 episode of CSI where Lady Heather was charging about $800k to allow a client to off her, as that was about what it cost to raise a kid from infancy to graduating from a tier 1 school!
Good story, in general, but there are at least a few important things missing. 1) The financial arrangement is much too soft and low; 2) the two guys beat up by Jeff are deserving ones; this beating was deservedly coming to them, but the main culprit was off the hook much too easily. Jeff should have had the chance to kick Matt's balls up and into his stomach where they could have dissolved by the acid from his own stomach and end up being what he was: crap.
Overall: 5*
BJ
Another great story from a very good writer. Well written, with a great storyline. Well done 5/5