All Comments on 'Keep It In The Family Ch. 03'
by domdaddy4u
- 14 Comments
Socially_Ineptalmost 13 years agoThis was a surprisingly good series. I really liked how everything worked out.
Excellent series.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI truly hope this is not the end of this story. I really like what has happened and how the son has such control. I wuold like to read more about this family.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agothe son needs a g.f. to bring into the family but not a family slut.
C_frommnalmost 13 years agoI think it would be Nice to have either Peter or the Nephew (Master) getting the 2 women Pregnant and Solidifying the Total Dominance over everyone and with him Working from Home it would make it easier and more accessible to Impregnate 1 or Both Women.
Nitro70652almost 13 years agoExcellent story, told well with logical moves that could be easily accepted. My only comment to be constructive.... at times during this chapter and the second chapter, you were describing something "Samantha" was doing or having done to "her/him". During those paragraphs you used "her" or "him" to refer to that character but it was never consistent and sort of broke the momentum for Me. Other than that, NOT BAD.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI think we should have a forth chapter in which the son makes hot sex with Samantha.
egismover 12 years agoThis story has so much potential. Please let it continue!
bumblegrumabout 12 years agoA hot, logical continuation of a great story. Lots of scope for more (although, personally, I'm not a fan of the pregnancy idea, but that's just me). Please let's hear more of this family, perhaps with some other family members - a grandmother, perhaps?
Anonymousabout 12 years agoFagg etc. by Anon if you do not like a story stop reading it why make a negative comment ? I thought all chapters were very good
Anonymousover 11 years agoReally liked your story, The wrong pronouns used throughout the story as well as many misspelling errors. Please use spell check or have someone proof read your story before it is submitted. Otherwise I liked how the story was built up and how his uncle learned how to treat his wife. Roll playing for his dad as a woman was a nice touch.
