All Comments on 'Keeping the Secret Ch. 03'

Well whatever floats your boat. I read the last few paragraphs and I am curious to know why someone would get pleasure from finding out about this. A fantasy should always stay a fantasy. To act it out means it is no longer a fantasy but real life. I hope you enjoyed writing the story other's of course will applaud the story. But because you had an ending that made me think, And? it did nothing for me. Try something new next time. This is old hat stuff.

the haters on this site. the story was hot and I enjoyed the entire series. Thanks for the entertainment.

great interracial story!!! luved it!!

Sweety, you have a definite talent, from experience?

Sex god good racial and inter-racial story. A brill read in these racist racial tension times. I wanted to be one of the black men, and that was not entirely dimensional dreams! Writer's note: Top class and the written english near as Damn perfect. Almost too perfect. . Characteristisation suffers. Also the scenes a little over described, eg 'put it in' play has an assumptive target and only where the 2nd prick joins the first Penis or goes anal, or other, would specification be, if anything over, elaborated . .like cm by cm. However this is writer's style and all her subs reflect such tact. Fans will expect such angle in future, to sit comfortably without author's note. However, back to top, this is one of the better story sets on Lit. Only mean student press ex-editors might suggest a tad over written. XX

very good story.......very hot and sexy.......

the pic in your profile is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Unbelievable body.....so damn sexy!!!!!!!!