by msanders1212
What is the story here? Her husband is a cuckold, we know that. Does he know it? Her husband is hung up on black folks? So now her lover hires a black escort who bring two other studs with him? They are going to dance, are they bi? Is her lover bi? Explain please
Sorry, guys, I am new here... I shoulda given some more in the first chapter. Your comments are fair.
I have five more written. One is "pending" and should be released in a couple days, others will be released quickly thereafter. There will be about 10 chapters to this story, I think.
Much of this is real, and she is reading this with a great deal of enthusiasm. You are reading each chapter at the same time as she is.
Boring and pathetic attempt to pull the reader in, not enough to get me to come back and read more. 1*
You had the makings of a very fun story with all kinds of possibilites, but then you left us hanging... I would call this a tease because you talked a good game but didn't give enough of a "feel" to think I got something! Now it's time to deliver on that and put out Part 2 through 5 if they're going to follow suit.