All Comments on 'Kelly's Conversion'

the hero of this tale

I give it a 50 rating because there were a lot of sentence fragments, and other editing mistakes.

However, the author gave us a very good, if disturbing, glimpse into the mind of an obsessive and twisted individual. The thoughts and feelings of anyone else beside himself are as nothing to him; all that matters is his self-gratification. Of course, the woman must suffer because she rejected his advances. To him, that makes complete sense. Similarly, even though he drugged her and then raped her, he sees it completely differently. She's a "slut," and behaved sluttishly. He is not motivated by love, nor really lust or desire -- his motivation is to punish, humiliate and ultimately destroy this woman simply because it amuses him to do so, and because he feels she deserves it for not going out with him. (Perhaps she sensed his true self all those years before? Better a drunken philandering husband than a sadistic predator, I would say)

Whether intentional or not, the author has done a very good job of showing us a glimpse into the cruel and soulless heart of a predator.

great

Fucking awesome story. Can't wait for the next part.

The storyline is fine but you definitely need an editor. It's hard to read with so many errors in grammar and sentence structure.

hmm you are one sick individual! Borderline serial killer perhaps? There is nothing erotic about putting someone through that much pain. And you really should have left the line out about ur blood, cum and shit covered dick. That's just fucking nasty!!!

for a nonconsensual story, this has all the makings of a real winner!