All Comments on 'Kelly's First Time'

This is a good start, just ignore that idiot there will always people like that. i would like to see more of this kelly, just write moe and youll do fine

Good story for a beginer, I look forward to reading more

You had a good idea, need to fill in the details a little more!

Look I know this is just porn, but is it really so hard to do a quick check for grammar and spelling?

He said, she said. BORING

Seen it before. There.s not really anything special. Like, a lot of other stories out there. :/

Weird. Fictional as this, i just don't see this scenario happening.

Yeah, I'd avoid the pun if possible but the story feels a little forced; but then it can be harder to get the flow down in a short story.

should learn where the Hymen is before you write about breaking it