All Comments on 'Ken and Sara's First Time'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
good job

Hot story - love the forbidden aspect and that Sara is the one that does whatever it takes to close the deal. How can any guy resist a woman like that? Ken was definitely interested and suggested it but the way she took the first opportunity she got is really hot. As the reader you like Ken and know he's in trouble but the picture you drew of Sara is too good to not be right on board with him getting to be with Sara. You want them to be together.... Hot sex seems like only part of their connection but still the most interesting part....

i also love that you ended the story there - would have give 5 stars but it can't be a 5 if she doesn't get to Cum. There was really no place for it so it needs a sequel. It would be cool to learn that she'd been masturbating to thoughts of him too. Good job

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
GReat

Great, hot story. More, more, more, more! Please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow

Incredible. Just Incredible hot story, where I felt I was in the car with Sara! WRITE MORE!

woody1230woody1230over 9 years ago

sounds like my wife and me when we got together. please share more

psps1psps1over 9 years ago
lovely story!

We had wonderful sex together after reading this story!

Paul & Suzi

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