All Comments on 'Kidnapped'

please continue

pissing thing is extreme hot

please continue

Will there ever be a second chapter?

You need to prof read your stories this han so many back and forth it was inpossible to read

I thought this was a great story but you need to find a way to let usvknow when you are going back and forth. Even just an asterisk before the flashback would have helped to clear up confusion. Otherwise it was awesome and got me checking out your other stories.

Looking forward to the rest of the story!