All Comments on 'King of the Boardwalk'

bad writing

for one I don't have to have dreams about fucking white women and I'm sure all you racist bastard know this. for two. I should berated. This was a cast off story, not edit, just put it out there to see if Literotica has changed since I was last on here. and i see that it hasn't. Women love my stories and the white guys on here resort to racism instead of constructive critism. It's cool because I'll continue to write. :) my next few stories will be edited.

i liked the situation love to spend a weekend with him , and he can call me anything he wants to just keep that pretty cock in me somewhere

Who the hell is Kathy? And is the boy a paid Giggolo or something?