by My Erotic Tail
Phew, that was one hell (hehehe) of a tale. You had me on the edge of my chair.
Nothing erotic in it for me, but it was worth reading. The only thing that bothered me was the occasional grammatical error.
Wow, well written and captivating. I was drawn into the story and couldn't stop till I had finished every word. This has so much potential for more or perhaps a novel, This is a must read for spine chilling excitement. You have deffinetly spun a web with this tale Art.
That was absolutely spine chilling!!!!
Are you going to do a sequel? Fantastic... I was engrossed to the end.
Even with the Hannibal like opening this was pretty good, had to read every word
A great story, a cross between Silence of the Lambs and Dracula well written and worth the time to read, please Encore, Encore
I've read worse stories, but your stuff would be much better if you used "spellcheck", and worked on yoour grammer.
I love a good horror story, and this was one. Great idea!
Grammar and spelling errors aside, it's a good read and kind of reminds me of Silence of the Lambs.