All Comments on 'Kiss of Death'

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Black TulipBlack Tulipalmost 20 years ago
A hell of a tale

Phew, that was one hell (hehehe) of a tale. You had me on the edge of my chair.

Nothing erotic in it for me, but it was worth reading. The only thing that bothered me was the occasional grammatical error.

bamagirlbamagirlalmost 20 years ago
Horrific~

Wow, well written and captivating. I was drawn into the story and couldn't stop till I had finished every word. This has so much potential for more or perhaps a novel, This is a must read for spine chilling excitement. You have deffinetly spun a web with this tale Art.

doormousedoormousealmost 20 years ago
Whoa!!!!!

That was absolutely spine chilling!!!!

Are you going to do a sequel? Fantastic... I was engrossed to the end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
It needs more

Where is the sex? I needs sex!!!

Joseki KoJoseki Koalmost 20 years ago
Pretty good

Even with the Hannibal like opening this was pretty good, had to read every word

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Really Really Good

A great story, a cross between Silence of the Lambs and Dracula well written and worth the time to read, please Encore, Encore

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Spelling

I've read worse stories, but your stuff would be much better if you used "spellcheck", and worked on yoour grammer.

Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionabout 17 years ago
scare me!

I love a good horror story, and this was one. Great idea!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Grammar and spelling errors aside, it's a good read and kind of reminds me of Silence of the Lambs.

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