All Comments on 'Kiss of Fire'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
yelling

please remember that Sirs do not ever need to yell. good start

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Rawr

Sirs do not need to yell but they can do whatever the hell they want to do. There are thousands of iterations of BDSM, this is sexy, please don't insert random, pointless opinions into the reviews. :P

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
music lover

Why oh why didnt i learn the violin instead of that silly piano! Thanks a wonderful fanasty!

huggs

suzanne

keairankeairanalmost 17 years ago
good bdsm story

good story, but please don't hurt the musical instrument, violin bows are incredibly delicate, If that happened in real life, it would be surprising to learn that the bow didn't break (assuming the bow is wood)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
OoOoOo

i loved this. i have to admit i was suprised at the yelling but i think it gives it a rougher edge. great work!

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