All Comments on 'Kissin' Cousins'

Great character development, great story, great build of the sexual tension. Best I've ever read!

way tooooo short. Sorry I even clicked on it

Seemed like it was more of a thought than a story. Set in something larger this would be ok.

But the story needs a little more life in it.

For one thing the story is too short, not enough was written about what went on after he got to his aunt's place.

It's good for a first chapter, one might say a good beginning, now the story needs a middle and an ending.

I hope to see more of this story.

There is more on the way. My puter crashed and I lost the other chapters, but trying to regain. I should have labeled this as Chapter 1, sorry.

I'm glad there is more cumming - This is short and sweet, but by itself is a tease. Even if you don't reproduce the lost chapters exactly, I'd love to read about what happens next.

That was a great story. Would like to see where it goes.

You got only half way through it.

Not a very long story but quick and fun.

Sadly.........

I wish there was more is there any chance of it coming back to life?

As stated earlier, I lost the additional chapters I had, but because so many of you have asked for more, I promise I will write another chapter this weekend!