All Comments on 'Kissing Cousins'

Killed it for me. great build-up otherwise and good story, with a bit of editing.

what a disappointment - all the potential off a great story, but it sounded like it was written by a kid!

Needs some serious editing to sort out mistakes, like the 2 pairs of panties she must have been wearing

While perhaps it was't quite award material or there were a few editing mistakes, I found it to be quite a thrilling, if simply written, story.

did the writer even graduate grade school? i know if i was the head of his high school i would demand his diploma back.