All Comments on 'Kissing Rowan (revision)'

I need feed back. Please leave comments. Some might find this story wordy. Others might think it 'dense'. Keep in mind its part of a larger story. Thanks, U.

Very interesting story. It wasn't 'wordy' or 'dense' I'm really interested to know what will happen next so please bring the next chapter(s) quickly.

You have that thing -- keep writing. You have a good story telling talent. What will happen next? I'm eager to know. Thank you for the wonderful story & looking forward to read more from you.