All Comments on 'Kissing My Friend's Girl Feet'

keep going

Good sentence. It describes the whole story!

Great work!

Yes, a fun story, but the word choice, spelling, and grammar is atrocious - even in the title: "Kissing My Friend's Girl Feet"? I think you mean "Kissing my Friend's Girl's feet" which sounds equally bad. How about just "Kissing her feet as she is fucked"? Anyway check the grammar with an editor.

I liked the story, but work on the details of it. Slow it down, give us more of it as if it's all in slooowwwww moootionnnnn. Lots of potential here, though.

Wow love it. He is so lucky to get to suck her feet and then jack off after watching them fuck.

I'm excited to read the rest of the chapters!

Getting to suck a pretty girls toes and feet as a friend fucks her is so exciting but then to have her let me jack off as she watches is everything I could wish for. Keep jacking as they fuck in the other room and eat my cum.