All Comments on 'Kitten's Father's Story Ch. 02'

You need to learn English grammar better. You used "passed" where the context called for "past." You must learn the difference and use the correct verb form.

There's no point in giving this 'author' points on grammar, spelling, story construction, punctuation, or even how to make sense, as he's convinced he's a leading authority on all those things, and will only give you a long-winded diatribe about why he's right and you're so very wrong. Leave him be, he's obviously autistic...

PS No Stars

I shall miss this family of lovers and voyuers, as it appears you have moved on from them, but I have enjoyed their stories and hope you revisit them sometime in the future .