by sexyR2
This freaked me out just a little bit, good but....freaky
Please continue this story. The details of the slugs were amazing and seductive
Would you make a sequel? I really liked the story and it would be interesting to see what happens next.
...get an editor. Your repeatedly use the wrong word because SpellCheck corrected your typo to a real word, albeit the wrong one.
Depending on how her friend reacts, suicide is definitely an option. While I appreciate the forced genre etc, this is definitely going to be a controversial one.