All Comments on 'Kristy Meets Dad'

A great first effort, and it leaves me hungry for more. I can't wait for you and Dad to get together. If you were my daughter I couldn't wait fill you with my thick shaft and pound your little pussy. Maybe while you had your face buried between Kristy's legs. Does that sound hot to you, baby?

Not bad for your first story. Continue writing, PLEASE! Your next story should include your dad, maybe a threesome?

Keep writing your hot story.

pretty hot. Looking forward to reading the next chapter

I loved this romp about you and college roommate. I am that dad who fantasizes about my daughter and her friends. I've fantasized a couple of times while "sitting on the stairs" watching. Keep up the writing.

How does this qualify as incest?

Thank you, found this an enjoyable wee tale here. Nice character development, some dilema discourse as well from your main caharacter re this oh so taboo fantasy too. That's what helps make this a beleivable tale, adds to any erotica and thus allows the reader to lose themselves in the images you paint, the mark of a good well writen story or tale.. Read you Bio here too and yes hope to read more "excerpts" from your diary soon...

please...?

really good story. For all its shortness, there was good character development, smooth development, and believable action. No incest yet, maybe, but if there is more to the story, this is the background and lead up to it. Well done. Keep up your writing and ignore the trolls. caprine

Although a lot of the early details (the basketball game, for example) didn't really add to the story, the descriptions of the characters and the sex were very well done. Also, that's a marvelous picture in your profile -- absolutely beautiful.

that just lame dad should of slipped in behind and given the friend a poke and then moved on to his daughter if your gonna post in the incest catergory have some incest

The believable scenario you created made the story feel as if it could have happened--which made it especially sexy. Good job!

very sexy would love to read what happens next with u ur dad and kristy

God, this story was awesome!! Really arousing, and definitely leaves me wanting to see more of what happens next. Don't keep us waiting too long, okay?!?