All Comments on 'K's Candy Ch. 005'

You've started with a great structure of fairly realistic slavery. I'd love to see you continue in the same vein. I can't wait to see how "Candy's" limits get pushed, and her reactions.

Nice job.

Candy is really starting to learn what a slave is. I look forward to more, but I wish she would combine chapters.

Nope not for me, she doesn’t want a D/s relationship she wants Mistress : Slave. I know it’s meant to be a fantasy story but FML “Candy” is an absolute neophyte in all of this. It’s way too much too soon.

Katherine just comes across to me as a predatory manipulative controlling bitch. They’ve only shared the house together for a week then boom straight into slavery!?!

Best of luck with your writing.

Tess (uk)