by LazyDays1221
Good short story. Some good background, sexy dialog and good description of the sexual actions. The girl's enthusiasm is sexy.
I barely made it 2 the penetration B4 I shot my load! I think that the 4 fingers + cock was a bit overdoing it, though, sadly. I mean c'mon she's a virgin 4 Chrissake! What the hell. Okay, she's horny, but flesh has limits as 2 what it will take, U know! That was the only negative 4 the wonderful cum-dripping story that I saw. Hope 2 see more from you; cuz THIS was exceptional, indeed. Mmm, yummy! Got 2 clean up now. ;)
yeah really hot story! but one thing...why did jake just let the thing about your father raping you slide...?
That story was really hot, except i felt that it was pretty much ruined when you talked about her dad fucking her. I mean, if i wanted to read that i would have gone to the incest category... Other than that it was really good.