by Maggie Red Rose
Gayesha almost sounds "Gay" "Esha" :)
Other than that the story is well written.
I would love t see this story turned into a film....If any XXXXfilm makers read this story they would be mad not to make the film of it....It would be the best film of it's kind ever made, a sure world wide success in every country...Maggie Red Rose I implore you to write a screen script and submit it to as many film makers as you can....Compared to this story Deep Throat
is just a childrens story... Thank you so much for writing it, I shall print it off and keep it to read on my plane journeys....I absolutely love it, and will never tire of reading it....
Big ((((Hugs))))and kisses Sandi xxx
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I though this was pretty good it just keeps getting better and better, just leave out the handcuffs and other things