by ceres_andraste
please keeping writting i would luv to know that happens next..... just a quick suggestion add a little more detail to their love making.... but other than that i love it! pls pls keep writting :)
Really good story, crying out for further episodes..
Loved it
I think it was a great story.
It would be a perfect idea for a book.
I think the love making should've had more details but other than that it was great.
Keep up the good work.
Great story (series) I love it! The only thing I would suggest would be adding more detail to thier love making, the end of it seemed a bit rush and laking in detial, as opposed to the foreplay with was detailed enough to be satisifying on it own. Great work, hope they'll be more to come.