All Comments on 'Lair of the Carter Brothers'

This was a really lovely story! Please, submit more. I will take you at your word that this is not the end!

I enjoyed the premise, although you seemed to have rushed through this somewhat, which took an edge off the tension. Her escape was pretty easy as well.

I loved Katie's delerium dreams as well. I thought that added a psychological aspect to this. I do believe it could have been played up even more to encompass some internal struggles she was having on sin and faith in the face of unimaginable horror.

You did a very good job it was an amazing story and i hope to hear more soon!