All Comments on 'Lana & the Love Egg'

Excellent first posting. I love to read erotic stories from the UK.

I'll be looking for more. ~CajunBill

My major complaint would be the punctuation. Too many commas when an extra full stop or two should have been thown in. It made it a bit of a challenge to read. Good punctuation helps keep things moving smoothly. Other than that, though, I enjoyed it. A good premise and lots of good ideas.

Oh my that was good. Fingered myself silly, orgasmed three times, my fingers stink of pussy. I want cok. I need cock in me.

Loved this story! Felt like I was Lana! Couldn't read fast enough! Have to go find my husband to fuck me, wish I had Lana's egg!