All Comments on 'Landlady'

Dump the mixed language garbage, it does nothing but confuse and waste space with the constant (translation) bit. Use a single language for the entire story.

But how many Americans would try to read it if it was all in Hindi? From comments on this site, it seems they even struggle with European, Oz and Asian dialects of English.

I wish I had a landlady like that. any more chapters coming? I appreciate the Hindi nouns for various items. Nice to learn them.

A nice story, down to earth and pleasantly gentle. Your English is excellent, with the slight differences in grammer giving it an 'Indian' feel to it - obvious of course - but it gave the story a fresh innocent feel.

Nice story. Added 5 *.

hope it is a true storu