Lapdancing Girlfriend Ch. 04

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On the way home he told her she would receive an alert through her tattoo once a team was prepared to shadow her in Los Angeles. Nick would be driving the van down to California in the morning, but it would not be there until the evening; however, there would still be agents around able to use the surveillance gear, having portable versions as well.

"Just act natural, and if you see anything that may look suspicious, take a picture of it with your camera or hold it up to the belly-cam," he told her.

"Belly-cam?" she asked amused.

"Nick's idea," the agent said, shrugging his shoulders.

She arrived home and taking the plastic case containing her new jewelry, as well as a duffel bag containing her sports bra and skirt which Agent Geiger had been kind enough to retrieve, preparing to get out of the car. He again apologized about her missing panties to which she shrugged, explaining it was not unusual.

Agent Geiger remained in the driveway until she was inside and turned on the porch light as she watched him drive away.

There was one voicemail message on her phone, Mr. DeWight's voice filling the receiver. "Diamond, a limo will be arriving around 8 am to you up. You have a 10 O'clock flight to LA; the driver will have all the details. Do not bother packing, everything will be provided to you at your hotel. Also the driver will bring your outfit to wear for the flight; all you need to bring is yourself."

Knowing the earpiece was near her bugged earrings, she said out loud, "Nick, you there?"

She contained her reaction from the tattoo better expecting it.

"Did you hear that?" she asked, answered again by the steady thrum on her back ribs.

The house seemed desolate missing everything her and Dan shared, as well as Dan. She decided since she did not have to pack, she would get ready for bed, so showered off the stickiness of the Sprite, sweat, as well as the cum from a man other than her fiancé. She was too exhausted to care if the hidden cameras showed her nudity or who was watching. Glancing up, she could not even see where the camera was, impressed at the lack of evidence of anything there.

Finally crawling into bed naked, she thought about the past week. She had four different guys have sex with her, only one being her fiancé and the man of her life. She had been fingered by even more men. She had sucked off two others. And she had signed a contract to become a porn star.

As she drifted to sleep, she wondered what the next week could bring to top that.

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tangledweedtangledweedover 6 years ago
Holy Redunancy Batman!

Repeating every scene from 2 or 3 or 4 points of view really makes the story drag. There is not enough personal insight from the different viewpoints to make them worth stretching the already long story out more.

The rerun scenes get boring enough to make you skip ahead pages at a time to try and move the story along. This chapter has about 15 pages that don't advance the plot or give significant new insight. The whole FBI show was far fetched and pointless.

That being said, I like the story enough to try and finish it, but am almost dreading the 40 pages coming up.

WorldsApartWorldsApartalmost 8 years ago

Still come back to this chapter. It's my favorite of the series. When you finally get around to finishing it, I'd definitely buy it if you made it into a book.

DocCISDocCISalmost 9 years agoAuthor
@Anon

Appreciate the comments and praise!

The main reason I reiterate some of the previous chapters is I know how long it takes for me to get a chapter out (in my Annie story's case, well over 2 years!) so try to do a recap for people to catch up on. Probably unneeded as after that long, people read the previous chapters over anyways, but it's become a habit for me.

I DO try to put a divider though between the recaps so if people are reading the entire series they can easily skip it...

Again, thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Perfect

Hooked since the first chapter. I've been craving for a story just like this. Hoping to find one as a video but have had no luck. Wish porn movies were as hot as this story. Personally find parts of the story take too long to get to the point and the recap of previous chapters are kind of unneeded. Unless you've haven't read the previous chapter but why would you do that?! Unfortunately there are many more chapters to come and it will suck having to wait. Honestly hoping for a unhappy ending...

DocCISDocCISover 9 years agoAuthor
@Anon

I'm sorry you did not enjoy the story, but I'm sure you'll find more realism elsewhere on the site ;)

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