All Comments on 'Lara Goes Back To School Again Ch. 02'

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NightOfPassion2NightOfPassion2almost 14 years ago
Wowwwwwww

Very nice. Erotic. Sensual.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Damn that was HOT

PLEASE I hope this story continues

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
WTF!!!

The stories up to now have been pretty good. This one is the worst ever. How did they transition from standing in just their knickers and then climbing on the bed facing other to then start rubbing their hairy pussys at the same time? When the fuck did they take off their knickers? Boo. Poor writing on this one.

OneNemesisOneNemesisabout 11 years ago
Imagination, dear WTF(Anon)

The biggest fault of many short stories is that they say too much. This one, while it has some faults, does not say too much, it's says just enough.

You need to forget about little details (where did the knickers go) and concentrate on imagining two naked women playing around. For instance, do you really wonder how your underwear are not covering your bottom when you defecate? No, you just do it without thinking.

So, just imagine.

gspanker051gspanker051about 11 years ago
Needed More

The story needed more detail such as their knickers off

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