All Comments on 'Laresa's World Ch. 17: Bruno'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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Black TulipBlack Tulipover 17 years ago
Great linking

I really like the way you linked into the last chapter.

Great story, and where can I find a Knight like that?

Black Tulip

DarkniciadDarkniciadover 17 years ago
Wonderful!

The link between Severusmax's story and yours hits hard, with the way Laresa moves on full of emotion, and sharp, unexpected turns. Then we get to the naughty bits at the end, oh my ;)

SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXover 17 years ago
Excellent work!

I like how you continued with the Rolf and Heidi angle, before moving back in time to a rather independent-minded knight in the Middle Ages. I also like how you teach Wilhelm a lesson. And the sex between Bruno and Laresa is great, not to mention how horny you make her after so long without it.

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