All Comments on 'Last Night's Masturbation'

The descriptions are okay, the writing is okay - but both could use some smoothing out. Repeated mentions of "it felt okay" or "it felt fantastic" could be amplified. More detailed descriptions of the feelings at different stages of sexual excitement would also help. This story sounds like it was written by a male who doesn't have extensive experience in watching or sharing a female's masturbation and orgasm. Nothing wrong with that, but maybe using a bit more imagination would help.