All Comments on 'Last Will and Testament Ch. 04'

Finally, Holly is beginning to get the picture, the larger picture. She's still showing some control-freak tendencies, but "better".

However, the storyline is becoming a bit tedious. Perhaps, to hold the interest of the readers, it might be wise to start cramming together some of these Requirements. (Maybe?)

KEEP IT CUMMING!!!!

...but you need to keep your names straight.

But this one leaves me cold. It is silly and not erotic, as far as I am concerned. I will not be reading the other chapters if you ever get around to writing them but I do appreciate your effort.