All Comments on 'Latina Mom Shakes The Neighborhood'

The constant mixing of tenses messes with the flow of your writing so much that it is almost impossible to follow it. You might want to think about at least getting an editor, or better yet, just find a better way to use you time.

you fucked this chick 2 months after she had a baby???? haaaaaaaaaaa good luck with that

Man, LW requires a little more than this for a passable story.