All Comments on 'Laura: 2010'

only so that I could honestly offer an opinion about this bunch of crap. To start, if you drive East from the United Nations, you will drive straight into the river....the story never recovers from that stupidity,

I was going to comment further, but this piece of junk story is not worth it.

Stupid Gay story

i would say you never read a book or went any farther in school then grade six and your story shows it did your mommy help you write it.

Not 6th grade; more likely 1st or 2nd grade.

How tough can it be to look at an online map of NYC? How does the word get to the club 'recruiters' that a fox is stuck in their area? The legitimate cab company which referred them did not know their characteristics! Do they pick up dozens of people with auto troubles in order to find ONE likely candidate? It seems much cheaper and less risky to hire a young & comely pro!

I think this was written with sincerity, therefore

2*

I can think of a few of categories for this one, but Loving Wives isn't one of them. Not much made sense in this story.

That's a lot of rape. Wrong category. 2*

This was so bad that I don't know where to begin. I don't know what's worse the author for writing or me for reading.

A single lonely retard with a computer, sick, not erotic.

stupid fucking story

..just...bad.

Worse story than Blade 3. I did give it a second star because at least he hit the spell check button.

You lost it.

well it sounds like it was all set up . But by who ?. Don't think it was the husband but maybe his wife. As she didn't put up any fight, and that her pussy had been shaved and she took a guy all the way up her ass without any problems. Lets have the next part dose she do it again???. they have her address as they had all thier stuff. lets see what happens and dose she get PG from it?

She should go to hospital for rape kit, then police, there must be somebody identifiable on the CDs that they are given.(Not Loving Wives)

It certainly felt like a rape. But since you left the story unfinished (at least that's what I felt) there's no telling what was actually going on. That's why I gave this story a low score.

You left her in New York!

Sounds like she really enjoyed the gangbang fucking. Think you better turn her in for a new wife. You are never going to satisfy this one.