All Comments on 'Laura & Hardy meet Abby & Costello'

by RonCabo

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
that is a marriage

his wife cheated on him with the guy alone fuck her divorce would be the only way.

bye

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great story

Don't let these clowns bother you. Great story. I, and I am sure, many others want more

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
well written story

I liked it. Thoughtful and realistic. Desires clash with love, and it gets fairly well resolved.

GreenleafRGreenleafRover 11 years ago
Nicely described

You did a wonderful job of describing the tensions felt when contemplating a big sexual change in a relationship. The difficulties that Laura and Norman had both with their own thoughts and also in discussing what they wanted felt very real. Thanks for sharing your writing skills with us.

NellaBarely2NellaBarely2almost 11 years ago
Can't Stop Re-reading This One

For those who have not travelled this new road, this is a perfect script to dramatize a typical introduction to Swinging, or at least a best possible outcome for those ready open to take the plunge. Not everyone travels at the same speed, and those few should pray they meet one of these two couples who care enough lead newbies ahead with reasonable caution along with a sensual level of training and tease. Ron, your works will be treasured by readers for a long time into the future. This should be a Readers Digest best read list - or does anyone know or remember that publication. OK, this may be too far advanced for RD - perhaps Penthouse Letters

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hahahahaha.

People are such weird and funny critters. More sex happens in their heads than in their bedrooms.

Thanks for a good story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Minor Comment

Bud Abbott was tall, Lou Costello was short. Interesting lengthy story covering their thought process.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

It was a story, it had a plot. It wasn't simply a bang-bang thank you ma'am.

MwestohioMwestohioover 3 years ago

Okay but didn't appreciate the two of them cheating on each other

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Thanks to all of you who have read and enjoyed my stories. I appreciate all of the comments, both good and the few not so good, and the high ratings. If you are new to my stories, it would probably be helpful to read them in the order they were written. The newer stories mi...

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