All Comments on 'Laura Ch. 03'

Wonderful writing.

I love the way you are developing the character of Chris and Laura together. I can hardly wait to see what happens when she tries to leave Robert and disappears into thin air. I hope that Chris and Laura do have a future together because I feel she deserves it. I would love to see Chris beat Robert into a pulp after what he has done to Laura over the last couple of chapters. Can hardly wait to read the next chapter.