All Comments on 'Laura's Beach House Vacation'

A very nice and erotic fantasy!

Rated low because you and your editor need to brush up on the difference between past and present tense of verbs.

Neptune is the Roman name for the Greek (Hellene) god Poseidon. But you gnu that, right? (Yes, pun intended.)

Could easily have gone in the Non-Human category, too.

I found myself getting pretty interested in this story. I'm usually a fantasy kind-of-guy, so it was an interesting take, bringing a fantasy creature in to a modern setting. It was also interesting to feature a merman. It has been a while since I've heard one referenced.