All Comments on 'Lauren's Been A Naughty Girl'

Thank you, britishknight, and well done for writing so well for your first BDSM story. I shouldn't wory TOO much about realism - a good imagination and a lot of escapism are the operative words here - just think of all those 26-year-old billionaires who are all into BDSM!

You did fine - five stars.

Well done. Realism and well-timed delivery come through despite what you added or didn't add.

Awesome for a first story. I would never have known if you hadn't made a note of it. I will be looking for further entries from you. I hope your muse continues to inspire you.