All Comments on 'Lauryn's Boyfriend'

Nice story once again writer. Thanks for writing the story.

please at least one more chapter, there has to be fall out from their actions, even if they where right in them, from barry and her friends, just would like to see how they play out

I enjoyed the read! I would like to see how things play out with Barry, lauryn, & Sean.

Thanks for writing!

Thanks for the feedback. I had not really thought of writing a sequel for this story, but the human drama does certainly suggest it. I will give it some thought!

Once again you've struck your readers' hearts and minds (and whatever else) with your great writing talent. This could easily be adapted as the two timing gal is acting more whorish and in real-life will continue into a path of destruction one way or another. This story could easily grow into at least 5-6 chapters. You have the writing skills to accomplish that feat AliceShayne.

Wow, that was hot and very nicely written. I think every man wishes he could love someone like that and have those feelings reciprocated.